Photo inspired by The Seven Deadly Sins: VANITY :thumb13310012: by
Daily Deviation
Given 2012-09-05
Vanity by =KismetVexel has some delicious, vibrant colours. The shading is also lovely and the simple background is a nice touch. (
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What pops out most in this are the beautiful colors you chose! I love how delicate the linework is, and the hair is just amazing, so vibrant and such a unique hair-style! The skintones are subtle and yet perfect, the area around her eyes is particularly well done.
As far as improvements go, you might want to go back in with a very fine brush to vary the size of the strands of hair a little more in the neck area. I can see you did it with the further lobes of hair, it just seems a little clunky in the strands on her right side.
Also, the lips and the ear look a little off in their shading. Considering the light source and the hair, the upper part of her ear should be a little darker, I feel, and have more shadows across it.
The skintones are subtle and yet perfect, the area around her eyes is particularly well done.
As far as improvements go, you might want to go back in with a very fine brush to vary the size of the strands of hair a little more in the neck area. I can see you did it with the further lobes of hair, it just seems a little clunky in the strands on her right side.
Also, the lips and the ear look a little off in their shading. Considering the light source and the hair, the upper part of her ear should be a little darker, I feel, and have more shadows across it.
Beautiful work, thank you for sharing it!
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